When I was told that I had to some editing for two 101 students I was really worried. Even though I have noticed that my writing skills have improved since ENG 101, I still feel like I’m not a strong writer. I thought “how am I supposed to edit a person’s paper when I’m not a good writer myself”. As I started reading the blogs that I was assigned to do, I was really into them. I found them very interesting and could tell they did some research. I also learned a few stuff, for example I learned about core self and that one should approach a situation with a positive emotions then the outcome will perhaps be good. When I started writing the feedback I was scared. I didn’t want to write anything that might offend the person who wrote the blog or write a comment that sound like an accusation. I wanted to be helpful but not hurt the person’s feelings. I tried to look for things that make me think “I like this” or “this is well done”, because I didn’t want to just point to things that they did wrong because they put great effort on their writing. Then I try to just point to things that I thought they need to work on. When I wrote a suggestion on what they need to work on, I tried to start with “I think” just because I thought it sounded nicer and I also added smiley facesJ.
After editing the two blogs I learned that I should work more on my paper. I usually write a paper and put it away for a few days and then I read it again with fresher, more critical eyes. I learned that I don’t always have to do that. I should proof read my work because I usually make common mistakes. Also, I’m horrible when it comes to grammar but when reading over my draft, if anything makes me stop and go back or if I don’t immediately understand means I should revise it. Basically I should be able to tell if my paper reads smoothly and easy to understand. In addition, I will try to make sure I don’t repeat myself in my paper. Furthermore, I find my introduction and conclusion interesting but I think I might have to work on them. I am also going to look at the quotes I used. I think I should take some out or introduce them better. The most important thing I learned though is that when I proof read I should print out a hard copy and not to proofread on the computer screen.
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